WALT: write a recount with focus on “expensive” words.
“In my best holidays.” My brother took all of us to Maraetai beach for a picnic and for a swim to celebrate my little niece’s birthday. My Mum and Dad and Sisters all came with us to help her enjoy her fifth birthday.
First, we spread mats on the grass by the beach and put our picnic lunch on them. We had pies and a tongan fruit salad called otai we also had a pink and white birthday cake with five candles which my niece Emily blew out.
Next we also sang happy birthday to the little girl. After lunch we all went for a swim in the sea which was cool and fun to be in. We also played a game of volleyball and then had another swim.
Thereafter, we dressed and went off to Valentines for an evening meal. My Dad offered to come here for my birthday and I screamed really loudly.
The Next Day, when we arrived at home from school I was extremely happy for my birthday party at Valentines.
3 comments:
Kia Ora Serena.
You have a good recount. I had fun reading. I also made a recount. My best weekend was at my cousin's first birthday. Did you have a fun weekend?
Hi Serena
I really enjoyed reading your recount, all about your best holiday. Reading your recount was fun and interesting. Did you enjoy your holiday?
Malo Lelei Ifa and Megan
I did actually like my school holidays. But the part I didn't like was when we have to dance in front of our cousins and family member. Is that all you wanted to know?
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