WALT: create a Maori Myth (Narrative.)
“Look!” said Andrew we found him.”Who said Mum”.“We found Wirepu”. Wirepu has brown wavy hair,he gets really red when he is angry,eyes as hazel like a kiwi fruit. You could get really terrified of Wirepu because he is really mental at all times. Wirepu was found in school. The grass will be green as kiwi fruit. Also smell the barbeque from a long way from the other side of school. I could see white and black medium bird flying in the sky.
Wirepu and his family have lived in a house for a long time since 1997 until 1999. Wirepu and his family went for a walk and he could see a big clear rain drop fall on the greyish sharp concrete. When Wirepu and his family arrived back from walking, their house was burnt down because of the Lava from inside the volcano. Wirepu was crying out loud “HELP”. People were walking past and thinking if he is disabled or something.
While Andrew was asking for help for them to buy a house there was this old man that Andrew asked he said he would lead them some money because they had left their money inside their house inside mums room. The old man rang and was talking to the Housing New Zealand had accepted Wirepus family. When the old man had told Andrew the good news Andrew was really amazed and he thanked the old man for getting them a house in the higher grounds
Then Wirepu and his family lived happily ever after they had moved into their new house the old man bought for them. Wirepu’s family were really happy and also jumping for enjoyment. Next time we should just live in the higher grounds. I hope next time I would love to get a bigger house for my family and I.
1 comments:
Hello Serena,
I like how you presented your Maori Myth Narrative, but you should work on making some of your sentences make sense, but anywho it was well presented. I also did a Maori Myth narrative and I hope that you can check it out, and give me some tips. Did you enjoy making this Maori Myth Narrative?
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