Jonah Lomu

Role Model

WALT: write a topic sentence and related facts.

Role Model

My role model is my Dad because he is really hardworking and working 6 days/week. My dad is really kind and overprotective. My Dad is the one who always tells me that I will need to work for whatever I wanted and I also love my Dad and he loves me too. My Dad is a really great athlete. He likes to play cricket,softball and also volleyball.

 

In school my role model will be Megan because she is really good at cultural dancing,art and also she is academic as well. Megan is a really good friend because she is always there when I am hurt and also when I need her help. The reason why I want to be like her because she is really good at dancing and also her art is always creative with her work.

In the community my role model would be Valerie Adams because I’ve always wanted to be a shotput athlete. Shot Put is the activity for me to try my best at athletics to be in the 2nd or the 1st place to play for the shot put. The reason why I always wanted to be like Valerie Adams because I’ve always wanted to popular. Valerie adams is half Tongan and Samoan. I am proud to be support my own country and also her country as well.

In my conclusion I am so happy to have these people as my role models. The reason why I chose these people because they deserve to be famous and also having good manners and also behaviours are changing. I love these people because I will need to achieve one of my goals of being a role model the people I’ve wrote down they mean so much to me as well.         

Improving my Recount writing

Attributes

WALT: Write collaboratively (Liam,Serena,Megan)

Success Criteria: 1. Start the paragraph with a topic sentence.

                            2. Use a variety of sentences. ( simple, compound, complex)

Liam

The Genie was the best Genie of all times. One day he came to into our class. One of the student came up to him with a bad manners. Then I walked up to the Genie wishing that I want to show respect by talking nicely at all times and use my manners also focus on my work and do not show my bad behaviour in class ever again. Being a good student in class is amazing because once you are a great student you will receive good luck.

Serena

From the lamp a genie appeared and wished me honesty. Being honest about giving money to other people is just silly. I cannot buy friends. I realised I carried a lot of wait and I am going to do something about it. I am a good girl and respect the teacher whenever she’s stressing. I’m also worried about my mother's health. I also do cooking and cleaning and get really tried. This work makes me lack honesty. I will need to improve being honest at school and at home because sometimes I can be dishonest about everything at school and at home.

Megan  

Genie wanted the students in room 11 to behave and to be a loving person. The genie is confident whenever he does his job to solve people’s problems and he uses his brains to think about everything in his working place. When a genie appeared the meanest boys in class. The genie gives a student bad luck because the students was being very rude to him.  

Prototec - Basic Facts

Today I learn't my fractions and percentages. When I last setted the maths prototec basic facts my sub score was 1/10 but the test I set was 7/10. I will need to learn more of my fractions and percentages. I did really well in the prototec my sub score was 7/10. I want to learn more of fractions and percentages. 

Maori Myth - (Narrative)

WALT: create a Maori Myth (Narrative.)

“Look!” said Andrew we found him.”Who said Mum”.“We found Wirepu”. Wirepu has brown wavy hair,he gets really red when he is angry,eyes as hazel like a kiwi fruit. You could get really terrified of Wirepu because he is really mental at all times. Wirepu was found in school. The grass will be green as kiwi fruit. Also smell the barbeque from a long way from the other side of school. I could see white and black medium bird flying in the sky.

Wirepu and his family have lived in a house for a long time since 1997 until 1999. Wirepu and his family went for a walk and he could see a big clear rain drop fall on the greyish sharp concrete. When Wirepu and his family arrived back from walking, their house was burnt down because of the Lava from inside the volcano. Wirepu was crying out loud “HELP”. People were walking past and thinking if he is disabled or something.

While Andrew was asking for help for them to buy a house there was this old man that Andrew asked he said he would lead them some money because they had left their money inside their house inside mums room. The old man rang and was talking to the Housing New Zealand had accepted Wirepus family. When the old man had told Andrew the good news Andrew was really amazed and he thanked the old man for getting them a house in the higher grounds

Then Wirepu and his family lived happily ever after they had moved into their new house the old man bought for them. Wirepu’s family were really happy and also jumping for enjoyment. Next time we should just live in the higher grounds. I hope next time I would love to get a bigger house for my family and I.              

Being Kind!

                                                       WALT: Be in kind in class